A void,
a terrible thing,
an emptiness in life,
the worst feeling I have felt,
knowing it cannot be dealt
a missing piece of the puzzle,
not knowing what fits in place,
not knowing how to complete your heart.
You try to fill it up,
with hobbies and even addiction,
like trying to drink your pain away,
but your causing your affliction,
you cause more suffering,
you tear yourself apart,
and all because your missing,
a piece to complete your heart.
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This is amazing!!!!! =] I love it so sad
<3
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Omg I luved it!!! its really good! Whenever I feel a void I generally try to fill it up by getting a boyfriend... yeah it doesn't always work out so good.
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A beautiful and very sad poem. Very true as well, people tear there self apart because they feel so alone and incomplete
awsome write
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I love this poem, its beautiful, really sad though. I know what it's like too, feeling like there's something missing, and just feeling so empty inside. It's a beautiful write though, you did a great job. I like the song and video clip too, they're nice.
xox
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Oh wow. That movie is so sad.
Great poem bro. I love the line in the song: Put the bottle to her head and pulled the trigger.
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DaMn..DaT wAs DeEp!!I hEcKa KnO hOw DaT fEeLs!!....GrEaT pOeM!!i LuVd It!!
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