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a stranger occurs

My last breath, would you still breathe,
hollow grin shaped by succulent lips,
Red auras are virbrant visuals so true,
Rainbows flow like chocolate melts,
Thoughts stagnent like voices hidden,

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WB 1 breath red hollow vibrant succulent rainbow chocolate

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Not your conventional poet but a solo musician also

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008

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    great job on the word bank. I really liked where you took this .. excellent job with your poem

    good luck

    kat