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[ attaching his love ]

attaching his love
to my sweater
fraternity pin

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Option 2-phi beta kappa pin....

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  • Mairi bheag gold member
    September 22, 2008

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    It didn't really need a title. This, to my mind, is the best poem of the top three, although I'd be really picky and call it a senryu rather than a haiku. Congratulations on placing.


  • Kappa Pyua
    September 22, 2008

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    I think you can come up with a better title, but you did pick the hard topic and congrats on coming up with this. Looks like you like a challenge and well met. thx for entering.


  • Frozentearz
    September 9, 2008

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    awww that is really cool and takes me back.
    best of luck to you in the contest.
    Blessings.
    Frozentearz

  • ea silver member
    September 9, 2008

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    ah, this is sweetly sentimental - I was just looking at my grandfather's gold fraternity pins and keys when I was home last week. This would be a cute idea for a Victorian Parlor Game, too!

  • Mike81890
    September 8, 2008
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    neat-o

    Simple and sweet. Nothing more needs to be said

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