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Silent

I have gone silent,
You haven't noticed.
You turn up violence,
I walk right passed.

My mouth is zipped shut,
You're stuck in a rut,
Made out of your words,
But I'm moving on.


In Silence.

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  • Slick99
    September 15, 2008

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    Silent

    this is awesome. the words flow, and you chose a good background!!! thanks for sharing, -slick99


  • Yorkshire Rose
    September 13, 2008
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    wow this is really good, brillainty put


  • Redeemed15
    September 8, 2008
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    Is this like about school today or Cameron or um. Something else? Either way, it's a good poem.