Are you in the mood?
To lay down and die?
Take a look at me
Quit asking why
You know death is inevitable
And chainsaws are questionable
Take a look into the mirror
There I am, your newest fear
This is a captivating moment
Do not be to scared to admit it
My reflection does not stand alone
I stand with a switchblade and cellular phone
I have called all of your friends
This is a bloodbath, that never ends
They will all be in on this surprise party
And I'll bury them all six-feet-deep
So won't you play with me tonight?
I will give you a chance to fight
Before I kill you, your friends, and everyone else
No one can be left alive! No chance in hell!
Now when you look into the bloodstained mirror
You see what you never used to fear
All of those that are closest to your heart
Are now in wooden coffins buried in your backyard!
Author notes
Eh...not one of my best, but its hard to do without cursing, lol. I hope to have given you at least a little discomfort when you sleep tonight, haha!
A contest entry
- Terrifyingly Scary by Freak-in-BlackJeans.
450 points, ended September 22, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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I think this is really good. i liked the line with the switchblade and cell phone. i think little details like that are what make a poem sometimes.
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Awesomeness... 
Bloody mirrors, just the thing I had in my ming. It completely reminded me of The Grudge and I completely am in love with blood at the moment... o.o
I love the rhyme, I couldn't really find anything wrong in it, or the grammar, it was great. I guess since I read it in the morning it wasn't really scary. But I'll think about it when I go to sleep, so I hope it is!!!
Good Luck in the contest!
Naoto
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Blast away...
I’d hate to see your blood on a mirror.
Children splashing in a tub of your blood,
splashing all over the mirror.
What’s scary?
People do scare me sometimes
but I know how to gnash my teeth.
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