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Our First Kiss

As the sun went down
We sat down to watch

You placed your arms around me
As it felt oh so right
But oh so wrong

You lifted my cheek
And gave me a kiss
Our first kiss was like magic

As days went by we came back to the place
Where our first kiss happened
Then one thing led to another

As you grabbed my breasts
And kissed me and pushed firmly against me
This felt oh so wrong
But it felt oh so right

Our first kiss led into something really special 
Which had to end so soon

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  • PinkPony
    April 15, 2009
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    OH... a poem packed with nature's passion... well said, good Poet.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 20, 2008
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    yes thoat little angel kind of gets drowned out does he not? Very good poem thank you for entering


  • PinkPony
    September 9, 2008

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    OH! Mother Nature prevails and that what keeps the population moving forward. A very passionate poem that is quite lovely!