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Untitled [Help.Me.Name.It]

It hurts to see you walk away forever, when I fought for you to stay.
You were an important part of my life, you will always be with me.
It hurts to cherish these destroyed memories so deeply.
That's what I get for forcing something that wasn't meant to be.

Still, I can never cry hard enough for you to hear me.
Even if my heart should call out your familiar name.
If these arms of mine yearn to embrace your touch again.
I'll let my voice rest, and allow my heart to heal from blame.

I could fill a thousand pages of what you did to make things this way.
Though I know you would disagree and be even more lost.
I keep myself strong, but doesn't mean I don't fall asleep crying.
Even though I don't show what's wrong, maybe I just got to good at lying.

You told me once, that a broken heart is like a broken mirror.
It is better to leave it, then hurt yourself more by trying to fix it.
So I am done bleeding even more, trying to pick up our broken pieces.
I was counting on forever, but just counted on the wrong thing.

Love can tear you apart, right from the start to the very end.
It's only for the lucky ones..that love puts them back together again.

Author notes

``Sean. For you. Since you have seemed to gain control of everything, I figure..no wonder you're all that fills up pages in my notebook.``

He'll never read this. Even if he would do so, he wouldn't understand my side. I need feedback on this poem. I realize it's all over the place. So make any corrections you wish. Also, some suggestions for titles would be nice. Thank you.

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  • Todd-ster
    September 10, 2008

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    wow, you blonde......can't name a poem. lol.

    how about, You Control Everything. you sort of said it yourself in the author notes.


  • Yy13
    September 8, 2008

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    How about "Reflections of a Broken Mirror". Good luck. Maybe he will read it, and more importantly, realize what your heart is trying to say!