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Make Love by the Moon

Dedicated to all moon lovers!

 


 

The bright white light of the moon,
Beams into the dark night of a bedroom...

Moonbeams illuminate the ambient venue,
For lovers passionately embraced a new...

Irresistible they are to one another,
The insatiable desire burning blow cover...

Exposing what is strongly feeling,
So ecstatically intensifying...

Feel the adrenaline surging through,
All the way from me to you....

 


 

Copyright:K:September 2008

Author notes

Picture credit :Unknown

Picture chosen PTION #3

Picture Depicts:Lovers in hot embrace with moon backdrop.



Allpoetry.com Contest
September 2008
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2420175
PIF Adult Quickie!
15 Poets
40 - 60 words
You have 1 Hour...
The usual rules apply.. if you don't know just ask..
You have 4 Options to choose from. please place link & Option # in AN.. Label all entries appropritaly ...
Pleas Label your entry appropriatly..
You need to be 18 to enter this contest & I'll be checking..
Have Fun and enjoy yourselves
kat & angel
Enter this contest
This is not an anonymous contest - the editors will be able to see your name.
Closes in 11 days, or after 8 more entries
Rewards - Gold: 500
Prewritten poems are not allowed.
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  • Angelflower
    September 10, 2008

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    This was a really sensual poem sis.. You did such a wonderful job!! very soft and sweet I greatly enjoyed it! best of luck in the contest!


    Angel


    • Kazytc
      October 3, 2008
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      Awww Thanks millions Sis

      Awww Thanks millions Sis, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx

  • mcfreeman
    September 9, 2008
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    Nicely joined.

    • Kazytc
      October 3, 2008
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      Thanks millions!

      Awww Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Kaz.
      Kazytc xx


  • Karlie67
    September 8, 2008

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    Amazing write it was fantastic!! really really loved it and the background makes it SOOO much better as it goes well with the poem! Thanks tons for writing I enjoyed it
    Karlie
    xxxx

    • Kazytc
      October 3, 2008
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      Awww Thanks millions Karlie

      Awww Thanks millions Karlie, for your fab and kind review you are very inspiring and encouraging.
      Glad you liked it.
      Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in them all.
      Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
      Mum
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  • HereComesTheSun
    September 8, 2008
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    great write but your background is distracting

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