Oh Sara my darling Sara
They carted you away
I must try to carry on
Without you
Oh Sara my darling Sara
I watched your last breaths
Living will be a trial
Without you
Your spirit will fly away
Into the arms of fate
I am prostrate upon the floor
Someone help me fill my needs
Oh Sara my darling Sara
I must raise the children
I must try to carry on
Without you
Oh Sara my darling Sara
Now we live alone
Your memory will live
Inside me
A contest entry
- Bring Me Hope... by PerfectImperfection.
900 points, ended October 14, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A very sad and beautifully pained piece portrayed within these lines. I am deeply sorry for your loss. Thank you so much for your entry & best wishes!
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Awww this was so deeply emotional.
Your words come straight from the soul
as these sentiments pour honestly from
your heart. You are a very talented poet
and this was a treasure to read.
Beautifully penned!
& good luck in the contest
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