so fat and well fed
buddha sitting on a thread
-september spider
In a list
A contest entry
- HAIKU by Swan song.
550 points, ended September 16, 2008, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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great
This brought a smile to me, as the enlightened one
might have conveyed and encouraged.
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The imagery is great, loved the twist in focus. Well done, congrats on the Silver Trophy for this one.
Dennis
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Brilliant!
I really loved the imagery of this poem. So tentative yet strong. A well deserved win
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Thanks kindly, Mariana!
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LOL I thought that this was brilliant!! Took me a couple reads over it, and then I just thought, "yikes, I likes it!" I myself can't write this form of poetry well to save my life, but you can,
thanks for sharing it!
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Reminds me of the question "Does a dog have Buddha-nature?"
This OUGHT to be unwieldy, this OUGHT to have too much in it, BUT it doesn't. That very paradox is totally zen, and this is a terrific haiku.
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Thanks for your kind encouragement, Mairi!
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excellent
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Caught that visual did you! Great imagery and feel to this haiku. I wish you well in the challenge.
Much Love ♥
Renee
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that one put a smile on my face. well done.
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I really liked the middle line... so much said with so little
like.. doesn't matter the looks... one can have all their ducks in a row and have a balanced life
just where I went
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love it!
m
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Oh, a very cool haiku! The AHA moment is absolutely great, and this is a lolapalooza! Good luck in the contest!
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kudos for your 'ku
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Yesss...
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