I feel that fascinating lure-
That the stars send out- every night,
I close my eyes and dream an open door,
Through which my soul takes flight-
The wind whispering across a mystic land,
Tosses my body to- and fro-
Every night something holds out a hand-
I cannot help but go-
Feeling that heaven,
Is not so far away,
I cannot help-
But go-
Every night,
My soul takes flight,
I cannot help,
But go...
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Your welcome and thanks for my reviwe.
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Excellent
Every night,
My soul takes flight,
I cannot help,
But go...
I like the theam of this
I may borrow the thought sometime
Very nice
Rick
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i really love this!! oh man this is really good, i think.
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I think poets and dreamers can relate to this one Jally
good luck in the contest sister of my heart
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I too take to flight at night. That same hand reaches for me, and I grab hold. I only let go when the face that stretches the hand to me smiles. That's when I glide. I love this poem! The best to you in the contest.
Much Love Always ♥
Renee
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But go..and you take us as well in your journey to the unknown land....I love it..well done..and my thanks for sharing it...
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Beautiful poem. Very peaceful.
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Darling this is our paradise
Iam waiting for you, there by the pine trees
I love you
Good luck in contest
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Soft
Just to go...Perhaps a flight into another time. Splendid write. Splendid thought. Peace.
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