Would you dare to chase your dream,
though impossible it may seem?
Dodging left and right,
would you put up a fight?
Don't you dare give up!
Would you take on the day,
as hope fades away?
would you run the good race,
as the cold wind nips your face?
Don't you dare give up!
Would you take my hand,
so that together we may stand?
Together with our Father,
the world is no bother.
Now, would you dare to chase your dream?
Please, don't you dare give up!
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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Excellent! I loved it! It reads wonderfully, and has a powerful message that's hard to miss ^^
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This reads well, smooth, powerful... I like the context, the way you took the prompt... it is wonderful to read and feel. Well done and good luck!!
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That was a Harry S. Truman write- just plain talk.
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whoa!! great write!!
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