Dear Amy
To me you are good friend indeed,
You brighten my day when you commented my poems
And life me up when I am down
It is a pleasure to be your friend
And an honour indeed.
I love you for who you are
And never let it change
Because I know you are loved by all
Until the end of time.
Author notes
LadyLuff
A contest entry
- MY Faves (everyone welcome) by peridotPixi.
600 points, ended September 22, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
please tell me what you think thanks =]
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congrats on winning
this is a verry good right indeed
verry good
keep up the good work
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Very Nice
well congratulations on placing in the contest and winning honorable mention. anyways this poem is very beautiful and well I liked how you worded the poem but I have a a few small suggestions for you to make this poem even better for ya
Dear Amy
To me you are a good friend indeed,
You brighten my day when you comment on my poetry
And lift me up when I am down
It is a pleasure to be your friend
And an honour indeed.
I love you for who you are
And never let that change
Because I know you are loved by all
Until the end of time.
Above is how I edited your poem and thuis inserting some suggestions for ya. over all this is quite a nice poem Luff and enjoyed the read. keep on penning away
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aww I liked this my best friend is called amy too..x
I hope to read some of your other poems too!.
message me any time I always like to talk to people on here because they listen you have talent I like the way you write your poems. speak soon
Natasha.
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ooh, I dont think the end of time should be there, cos, we dont like to think of that do we? but yeah, the rest is zany and has lots of love and energy. Grand piece, this, good write, most enjoyed.
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Aw-- this is cute.
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Thank you for this beautiful poem about me, i like the way you have expressed a wonderful friendship in this poem keep up the great writing,
~Amy
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