Forever
That's a big word
Tossed around lightly
When it really shouldn't be
You miss someone
Forever
Your heart aches
And It's not just a word
When someone is gone
Forever
You didn't know
That forever was this long
When something is missing
Forever
That emptiness is there
Now it has a meaning
Forever
It's a big word
It won't be tossed around lightly
Once you realize its power
Author notes
this is for anyone who has lost someone, you miss them, something is missing, a piece of your life that cant be sewn back in. A piece of your soul, chipped. Your welbeing is gone. You dont know what to do. Yes forever is a big word with a powerful meaning that should be taken very seriously
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- Missing In Action-Saying Good Bye by Lo0opy.
500 points, ended September 10, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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wow..this is very impressive. you have a very mature and wise writing style. Great write, i thoroughly enjoyed reading it.
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Aww, Morg, that's sweet! By the way, Happy Birthday! I'll see you on Saturday.
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Forever, Love, Hate...all very "big" words...with strong meaning...and that tend to be thrown around a little carelessly (did I spell that right?). This is good, I like the short lines in each stanza..gives the words a little more punch, if that makes sense
. Great job on this and thanks so much for entering!
~~T~~
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