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Darkest Shadows, Brightest Lights

Sometimes we feel as
we're drowning....

Nothing to give,
nothing to recieve,
just, nothing....

And then, as a shadow falls upon us,
it takes a little time to see....

Even the tallest
towering shadow
needs some light to breathe.

Even the brightest
blinding light
allows the shadows to be.

And no matter where we are,
in the deepest pit of shadow
or in the greatest veil of light....

There's always someone there
with a path to save us.

Well, what do you think?

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  • Anemone-Rose
    September 9, 2008

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    Ohhh, very interesting indeed, it seems to let out a little story along there. The ending is interesting, are sure there is someone always there? is what it seems to be asking. Very nice indeed.