If I asked you would you hold me,
If I asked you would you kiss me,
If I asked you would you love me.
do I even have to ask,
would you love me anyways,
would you still kiss me,
would you still hold me,
if i did'nt ask.
if I left would you still keep me in your heart,
if I cryed would you comfort me,
if I lied would you forgive me,
if I died would you still love me,
I only have one question would you.
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
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tell me how my poetry is and be honest
Comments
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This is actually very good -- despite the horrific background contrast, despite the complete lack of grammar...
I like it -- keep writing! Thankyou very much for entering my contest
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love it! reminds me of my friend
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