I whacked at this icky piņata
from an incestuous line of chordata
I split it in two
and was covered in goo-
the same goo found in raw sushi kata... bleh!
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Author notes
ech!
and the 'meat'? It was beat first, of course, then sliced and diced... hmmm... there seems to be another limerick in there somewhere... let's see...
The luncheon-meat sushi was tasty
a bit gooey, and for some reason, pasty;
I examined it closer
and it became grosser,
but I swallowed, not wanting to wasty.
ewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww ...
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A contest entry
- Raunchy, (again), Limericks (This is a contest) by blind ecye dog.
1000 points, ended September 26, 2008, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Thanks for entering.
Like most entries this is off on syllable count and the wrong syllables are stressed.
I was asking for original and the best you could do was follow an original idea? Oh well. RED -
Haha I loved both of those. Good job.
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Yink
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thanks for the yink, makes me want to try for two yinks next...
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One Yink is more than enough for everyone. Trust me.
Yink
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forgot these guys.. they like sushi too
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lol, leave it to you to be so creative
Do I dare even say that I am in the mood for sushi?
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in the mood for sushi after that... nooooooooo! (how do you think they get the rice to stick together, hmmmmmmm?) lol
and I'm not socreative- that was socrates' brother...
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