Phantasmagoria philosophies strung by an angry hair, standing erect from your brow.
“Give a man a fish; you fed him for today. Teach a man to fish; and he has a better chance getting Salmonella.”
Hook, line and sinker;
“incurvatus in se ipsum” snagged a ride on a gigantica gill.
Belly-up,
Bloated,
Gasping for air,
Parasites asphyxiate in the psyches of narcissistic dolphins.
Were I omnipresent, would your existential propositions be indestructible like the Titanic was unsinkable?; descending with remorse among bastions built from sand.
Author notes
Option 3: Photo,
basically, i suck at finding pictures so i'd like YOU to find one and use it as inspiration.
Mind's Thoughts:
Arax Šabaṭu- "the destroying month"
Social Darwinism
amphora
aquarius
"love that is bent towards self"
A contest entry
- everyone loves an options contest :] by etoile.
300 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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this was a very unique and interesing take on the picture; and there were parts i liked
but it was kind of hard to understand what you were talking about in the first line. {my vocab isn't that great haha}.
Belly-up,
Bloated,
Gasping for air,
Parasites asphyxiate in the psyches of narcissistic dolphins.
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i really liked that though
good take on the picture.
thanks for entering and goodluck
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This contest is false. I don't like options. They make my brain hurt. lol However, putting that aside...LOVED IT. It made my brain do a little jig. Seriously, though. I am glad to see you can still spit them out as well. Your metaphors sucked me in.
Hook, line and sinker;
Yink
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That's okay cause I am false like my great grandpappy's teeth.
YAH! Glad I caught a spigot!
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Terrible mental image. lol
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