Would you
salt me with your tears.
I live to alter fears.
Will you
take me to your pain
one touch; it can't remain.
Have you
thought of me lately
inside am I innately.
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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THis is fantastic! Short, sweet... very well done!!
Thankyou for entering my contest and good luck!
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Thank you so much for the HM and for your review lol
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