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off my mind

can't get you off my mind

my heart is beginning to unwind

all odds are against it

but if we do i will miss it

my friends dont approve

but it would be a hard move

to choose love over friendship

because in the end you dont know who you will be with

but beyond that i am scared to death

after my heart is broken what is left

but thinking of you all the time

now im writing down theese rhymes

i talk often, to shy to call

from the looks of it am about to fall

why has beauty invaded you

why can i not be good enough for you

im wanting you and whats inside

come out. you dont have to hide.

'i am not good enough for you"

says me, not you

i thought you were beautiful since i met your eyes

but looks dont matter it's what your heart lies

maybe i would tell you how i feel

but form fear,jeopardy, and inferiority, i will be silent, still

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  • Grey Wolfe
    September 25, 2008
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    cj

    this is awesome!!!!!


  • sonae
    September 8, 2008
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    I really like this it sound like me and my friend who im trying to get with


  • unavailable
    September 8, 2008
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    Great to read this!