To most, the world has already collapsed,
Each of us falling alone,
Trying to avoid the others around us
We pretend we aren't falling,
Infact we ignore the boundaries we have placed,
And then get angry that there are misunderstandings.
If we know this,
Why have we continued to plumit
Never to return to the surface that existed.
The world didn't collapse on its own,
And we love pointing the finger,
But we are still falling and the world we knew is gone.
The thing is,
If we had a chance to fix it,
If we could go back and save ourselves
If there was no boundary,
If we could take everything back,
Would You? Or is falling better?
A contest entry
- it is better to destroy than to create what is meaningless by Manorexic.
1200 points, ended September 9, 2008, 9 entries
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1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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Ahhh this is very good! Deep and smooth, very rich content I like that!! This contest is getting more and more difficult to judge
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