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Gehenna

Welcome child, to Odin's wasteland -
the Aloe Garden has died

Your mother ate the poisoned fruit
and beckoned a century's worth of flies
She spawned you from a womb of plague
and lets you crawl around

sifting through ash, in search of Nakir's
blessing kiss

You await the destruction, like so many other
broken children who drown in a pool

of blood, rust and mud

The birds swarm overhead
counting carcasses in strange
mathematical sums

You're one of the last alive
in the heathen land, the fire canyon

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Mohammed-AlSulaiti

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  • Riamh
    September 21, 2008
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    Wonderful poem. Well penned. Best of luck in the contest.
    Be well
    Slayer