pink pony's
and purple butterfly's
all over the rainbow
-laugh- j/k hear we go
hears my voice
let it be yours
fell my breath
and i will taste yours
holding you in my arms
i pry this night never ends
pressing my lips to yours
your love is my life again
your body was perfect
your mind like a maze
the perfect woman
to make me smile again
i see pictures of you
as my heart beets faster
my everything is for you
ill even be your little solder
you give me that rush like no other
and even i death i will be your knight in shinning armor
wen i hold your hands your heat fells my soul
my breath is yours
and i hope my voice will stay in your heart
my young goddess
i beg for your life
for i would gladly give mine for yours
Author notes
i am dark-prince this poem is not of my now but of my past
A contest entry
- [Cheer me up (again) ] by whiterabbit..
400 points, ended October 25, 2008, 24 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
tell me what cha think
Comments
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I like the opening to this. It's random but funny. The rest of the poem is really beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for entering.
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"pink pony's
and purple butterfly's
all over the rainbow
-laugh- j/k hear we go"
Reminded me of "raindrops on roses and whiskers on kittens" aka My Favourite Things - Sound Of Musical.
Nice twists and weaves in this; I really enjyoed reading it!
best wishes in the contest!
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wow this is amazing... none like u have ever written
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lol, love the opening! -calms down before reading the rest- ... if that is what love feels like i would love to be in love. ill try to have hope and pray ill find someone >.< -too many loves in this, sorry-
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