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If only in my dreams...

It has been better to have loved you in my

dreams rather than wake to reach out for you 

and feel nothing. 

 

 

To have heard you whisper my name, caress my face,

feel your body next to mine, than to have never felt you at all. 

 

 

In my dreams,

 

I can go back again and again to feel you,

hear you, touch you, kiss you. 

 

 

Sharing what only two souls

who share such a special bond could know. 

 

I'm afraid of the daylight which takes you away from me. 

 

 

For that reality,

 

I am not sure much more I can take. 

 

 

So for now I will go back to my dream,

back to your awaiting arms,

your loving touch,

your sweet caress. 

 

 

It is there that we share something so special words need not be spoken. 

 

 

I can only hope that someday I need not awake from this blissful dream.

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  • wow this poem really makes you think and feel wat you want us to, and thats an amazing quality to have. you are a very strong writer and posses alot of tallent keep up the work!

  • PerfectPrincess
    November 3, 2008
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    this is beautifu


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    October 17, 2008

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    very few can ever put such heart and feeling into their poetry, but you.... do it so well it is very easy to feel everything you put into the poem. It possesses heart and soul...


  • x-dont -ask-me-x
    September 23, 2008

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    thats an amazing wrie. To love some much would be amazing to loose them would be a horrid fate. Just and absoulte amazing write filled of love and hope.

  • Buffalo66
    September 8, 2008

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    VERY LAZY

    A LACK OF SINCERITY IN THIS ONE I THINK. READ THE REST OF WORK AND AM IMPRESSED. YOU HAVE A TALENT, MORE THAN MOST. MY EMOTIONAL IS I HEARD THIS A MILLIONS TIMES. SHOW ME REAL LOVE. HOPE I HAVEN'T INSULTED YOU, LIKE I SAID I THINK THE MAJORITY OF WORK IS GOOD


  • Grateful
    September 8, 2008

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    wonderful poem...erupting straight from the dreams...

    my favorite line:

    "It is there that we share something so special words need not be spoken."

    I really enjoyed it...all the best...



  • BillyClyde
    September 8, 2008
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    So Beautiful


  • StarEyes
    September 8, 2008

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    Mom,

    Ok, you know where this one took me And yep, you would be right in your guess. That says everyword how I feel! This is just wonderful Mom! You know how I relate to this, as that is what I have left now too. I sooooo love that dream world! The peacefulness it brings to my heart, the magic we share, the love, the hopes and dreams. Well the life we share there, is as you said, just perfect, and the place to be!

    What a wonderful read this one is!

    Thanks for saying what I have not been able too!

    and love

    Nyetta

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