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Imagination Lullaby

Dusts of sparkling notes
drift in drapes of moonlight
a twinkling sea of symphony

Another worlds luminescence
surge on unstrung thoughts
cascading flights of wisdom

Chained in melodies prison
touched in tapered velvet
gold mined in the moment

as faeries fall upon the windowsill
dancing sideways


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Visual Stimulation: Maldicion_Divina_by_medusa04@deviantart.com

I normally don't enter to become a family member. I just feel that must evolve on it's own. But I wrote for the asking and the fantastic pic that my Muse felt inspired by. If you feel inclined to include me in your family I would feel honored but I would never ask.

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  • nevadapoet
    September 14, 2008
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    what a beautiful write and perfect for the propmt. Well done.
    Nevadapoet


  • Confusedboy
    September 9, 2008

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    how nice your lullaby, was about asleep when the faires danced sideways, woke me. verysoft,caring.


  • Kazytc
    September 8, 2008
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    Awww Wow!

    This is just fantastic, what a superbly phenomenal write and totally enchanting too.
    I love the esseence and ambiance, it is so rich and feeling and this rhymes and flows to perfection showing how talented you really are, and how well crafted too. Beautiful sentiments and so lovely to read. Totally delightful. Love it, write on and best of luck in the contest hope you win Gold, its lovely!
    Poetic Hugs,
    Kaz.
    Kazytc xx


  • Shadow Lynx
    September 8, 2008
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    This is divine, truely sensational!
    Chained in melodies prison
    touched in tapered velvet
    gold mined in the moment
    What a stanza , took my breath away The whole poem opened up avenues of fantasy that danced in swirls inside my head. Thank you so much for entering and i would be honoured to add you to my family