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Summer's Kiss

Her breathing
...staggered...

Her throat
...so full...

Circumference wide
...vibrant red...

Hollow crevice
...slide inside...

Pleasure ensues
...so deep...

Succulent taste
...so pure...

Delicious treat
...frozen ice...

Tricky play
...popsicle love...

Summer's kiss
...dollar spent...


Author notes

Everyone loves a delicious cherry popsicle on a hot summer day.

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Word Bank #1
breath, red, hollow, vibrant, succulent, deep, throat

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    interesting take on the word bank prompt.. I really liked it.. great job..

    good luck

    kat