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[the breath of an angel]

Would you feel the words,
as I carved them into my heart?
Would you hear the pulsing beat
of nerves hit by your dart?

[a love]

The arrow tip,
that traveled deep,
and entered my soul's gateway...

[I breathe]

Would you always
be the wind,
the air for my lungs to portray...

[my air]


Would you hold my shaking hand,
and kiss my fluttering lashes?
Would you always be my lips and tongue,
and turn my pain to ashes?

[mended heart]

Author notes

Gave it a shot. =)

-12/26/07-(a lot a lot)

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  • VoltaicHypnosis gold member
    September 14, 2008
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    This is... beautiful... floats like a butterfly on a breezy tone... wow this is great! Well done...