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Garden Stranger



A man's inside my garden fence.
He's bent with the gait of the lame.
His wrinkled stare brings me offense.
His countenance causes me shame.

He's bent with the gait of the lame.
As if he'd lost a bitter fight.
It feels as if I know his name,
But, dare not whisper it from fright.

His wrinkled stare brings me offense,
Accusing with his piercing gaze.
He seems to demand recompense
Eyes peering from forgotten days.

His countenance causes me shame
as his demeanor matches mine.
I pray that we are not the same,
Yet, to his destiny resign.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 








 

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  • Age of Rain
    September 21, 2008

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    This has a subtle brilliance to it that forces me to read and re-read... what an intense write! Best of luck with this!


  • Dalaney gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    brilliance is most often and always
    understated...Dear Lord, this is
    one of those times....Love to you, Lane


  • echo-ink
    September 8, 2008

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    I loved this, Fantastic images of feelings, and it flowed beautifully, BRAVO!

    Bell xx