Don’t ask me how
They all know my story
And they just can’t
respect
That it was never for the glory
Only wanted her to see
Because I know how to be blind
With no one else of my kind
Just a walking disaster
A disguise I’d never master
So how do you say no?
When you see yourself in a stranger
That just keeps falling down
Scarred they’re gonna drown
I just want to forget it all
And while I’m at it
Just want to forget how to breathe
Die with no stupid glory
A contest entry
- DO I KNOW YOU??? IF NOT, SHOULD I??? by delightfulmess.
600 points, ended September 19, 2008, 30 entries
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Comments
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ooh i like it, I'm jealous of the rhyme because I can never write good rhyme and stuff... haha
lovely poem =]
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A very interesting and unique write. =] I enjoyed reading it, nicely written. Thank you for the entry and good luck.
x-Pretty-Odd-x <3 -
Just want to forget how to breathe
Die with no stupid glory
Wow. Pretty powerful emotions. Such a strong poem. Courageous and well written. Thanks for entering my contest. I'm honored to have you share your work here. Good luck!
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Oh my my...
This is some very vivid emotional imagery.
Well done. Thank you for entering my contest.
Delila
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