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The Cocoon

Remember the cocoon you gave me? You don't know how special it was to me,
I carry it everywhere in my purse, once to a crime scene,
That crime scene,
One minute I was there, the next I was gone,
I woke in a daze, in pain, a weight on my shoulders,
Broken glass showered me, blood bathing me,
I held that cocoon in my hands,
As I clawed at the wet mud of the desert,
Emprisoned by my metal penitentiary,
Hardly able to breathe,
I held it that night I dies,
Until you took  it from my hand,
Your tears empowered me,
As you held my lifeless body,
I was screaming but you couldn't hear me,
You were still in the land of the living,
Where I can no longer roam,
We lost each other forever,
it wasn't painful dying,
Nothing to the pain I feel now,
I never regretted anything,
Now I do,
I regret not being strong enough to hold on for you,
I regret closing my eyes,
Because in that final moment,
I lost you,

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For all you GSR/CSI fans only you will understand

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  • penman gold member
    September 8, 2008
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    Excellent

    Love the background and you words are very full of feelings. Great job thanks for sharing.