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Lost In You

under moonlight stars

autumn winds blow (silently)
and your heart penetrates my soul

 

dancing and exhausted with love

you kiss my face

penetrating your warmth

complete

 

heaven is your touch

as you hold me close

 

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words used: complete, soul, heaven, love, dancing, stars, moonlight, and autumn.

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  • Nature Song silver member
    September 22, 2008

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    Heaven is your touch as you make my world complete! Lovely poem, good use of the word bank! Good luck in our contest. ~Sie

  • Judith Chandler
    September 12, 2008
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    A nice romantic write. I like the thought of "dancing and being exhausted with love."