Words fall softly,
like notes upon breeze
longing to imprint ones soul
~forever.
Author notes
Picture Credit: http://abstraktphotography.deviantart.com/art/Poetry-52492873
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IX by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2008, 39 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Reading this my heart longed for something, which is unusual for me cause I don't long for anything
Beautiful!
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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Your piece is simply... beautiful.
I love it
Juls
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Your words move one to feel such deep emotion. Awesome take on the picture. Best of luck in the contest.
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Beatiful statement made but wouldn't it be breezes? Good luck. Rose
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This is stunning, I love the word choice on this 13 words, brevity is definately the key for your poem. Best to you in the contest
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A lovely write, my best wishes in the contest.
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oh that is so beautiful! I loved it.
best of luck in the contest.
SJ
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before i even looked at the picture, i thought of you and your poetry... the beauty of you shines so brilliantly from it that not only will you be remembered, but remembered with love.
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