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My Journey


I woke to the breeze
carrying the sweet smell
of salt upon it to my senses.

Visializing the break of surf,
the shift of the dunes
ever changing, never conforming.

And I was liberated,
released from form
from the orthometrics;

 

     lines, walls, barriers of glass and box
     losing binds of thoughts
     into shades of enlightenment:

     allowing myself flow of meaning;

     running like a stream
     in my construction of being.

I have established no boundaries,
no final conclusion, drawn no lines;
inside or out.

     as diversified events of water
     shift to directions
     which will change in a moment.

I am now willing to accept;

     erect no walls;
     destiny now accepted
     transformation is clear,
     round, smooth;
     no more sharp edges
     thus mental lines are clearer.

I will try to attach order,
closing gaps of disorder
widening perception;
enjoying the freedom,

     for as the sands and water
     wider forces seem to work.

There is no finality of visions,
nothing is viewed completely,
tomorrow is a new day
and a new day is renewal


    ~new pages to write
      in the book of fate.


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Destiny.....
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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    Oh my ! this poem blew me away
    I am in awe with your words and thoughts and feelings sketched .
    Love the background too
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes
    Julie


  • Malabu
    September 9, 2008

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    a book is a means to journey places traveled and places only our hearts can imagine...still moving we find new meanings to where we have been


  • maralisa silver member
    September 9, 2008
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    a brilliantly wonderful take on the promt good luck in the contest


  • Beret55 silver member
    September 8, 2008
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    I liked that Mystic Girl. Very well done.


  • daviscth silver member
    September 8, 2008

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    Oh my goodness!!! This had the most amazing affect on me as I was reading it. LOL. Can't explain it, so don't ask. Your wording is wonderful and the imagery is out of this world. WOW!!! AND, it goes so well with the BG. Good luck in the contest dear.

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