I try to write i love you on paper but it never shows.
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IX by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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This is so full of sadness. It makes me think of a lost love and your pen just doesn't know what to write. Very well done. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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I like how this can be taken many different ways; There is alot of love and sadness mixed in this
Great
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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So sad this sounds. As long as you can show love some how , I guess. Good luck. Rose
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Oh so sad, you need to get yourself a new pen if it never shows. Best to you in this contest. Well done
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Sad piece, my best wishes in the contest.
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sighs...how sad!
Best of luck in the contest,
SJ -
I didnt understand at first, but then I thought, invisible ink, cos when I realise love is blind, it may as well be. You want to see what you want to see, and then all of a sudden, I undertstood. Suppose, it's been a long time since I felt like this, awesome.
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