Because of you, I can now see
You’ve given me your energy
Because of you, I am now free
Free from the hurt and misery
Because of you, love came to me
A love that’s bound by honesty
Because of you, I came to be
Being with you is destiny
Because of you, I have no past
You’ve given me a love to last
Because of you, I’m no outcast
My love for you is unsurpassed
Because of you, Life’s not a strain
You took away most of my pain
Because of you, I feel again
Feel love for you I can’t contain
Because of you, I now feel strong
Stronger to know our love’s not wrong
Because of you I now belong
Fate brought me to you all along
Author notes
Love is only a kiss away...........
A contest entry
- Love Lost or Found/ Rhyme Only by piccola.
900 points, ended September 9, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
If there is such a thing as "Love at first sight" could there be "Hate at first sight?"
Comments
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This is lovely
If love is shown often it brings to light the words of love spoken for words are just words untill another feels this love through our actions
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Nice, it flows very well, congrats on gold! Somehow I missed this one before....Very good flow.
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first of all I adore your author note and would like to make a tag and put it on my page. May I? Your rhyme is great the portrays the rich feeling of love in it's words. It also flows well from beginning to end.
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Be my guest. Thank you for your comment...
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