My poem will remain unfinished-
the ink ran dry
before the emotions did.
Author notes
pic credit:http://abstraktphotography.deviantart.com/art/Poetry-52492873
13 words only
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IX by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Yes this is a good poem, but it kinda is a little dull, it lacks something, something important, the feel...Try hunt for it, maybe you'll find it.
Good luck
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This is very touching in only thirteen words. The subtlety is what you shared and so much about what you meant.
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o.O
It is so hard when this happens ... absolutely beautiful and touching
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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This always seems to happen. Good luck. Rose
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Fantastic interpretation of the prompt, the emotion always runs out long, long after the ink does, thank goodness for computers... no ink there. Best to you in the contest
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Very well done, my best wishes in the contest.
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oh how sad! this really touched me. best of luck in the contest.
SJ -
sigh. all in 13 words. you've got
what it takes, poet...Love, Lane
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Fantastic 13 words ...
All the best in the contest
Sue
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Awesome take on the prompt. You sure said alot in only 13 words. Wonderfully done.
Linda
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