tree has no choice
let autumn leaves shed
nature fixed the cycle,
of birth, death and rejuvenation.
water drop circles around universe
tossing up and down,
pushed from behind
pulled from up
phenomenon is choiseless
in journey of destiny.
we fix targets
travel towards them
fainting and faltering
persevere lay a hand on final mark
only one among the track
hits red tape.
competencies
seperate winner and loser,
death engulf all of us
what we decide is limited
in contrast,
what is already written
before we step here.
destiny is shadow
never leave us.
Author notes
destiny
'too Powerful to write'
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
450 points, ended September 9, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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a great take on the promt good luck in the contest


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