Destiny is a old story told
Where hearts and minds connect,
Revealed,
A shining moment of clarity
Glistening, soft, perfect.
A half remembered beckoning path,
That opens an inner door,
Surrounding my quietly hopeful spirit
With a sureness not felt before.
"Awake" I shout into this dream.
As my firsts steps draw me near,
To visualise the approaching wonderment,
A quickened heartbeat and softened tear.
Looking deep behind this future,
Is the vision, few can see,
But this sure unerring knowledge,
Will lead,
Where I should be.
08/09/08
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Destiny..
Picture :
Destiny by `garrit : http://garrit.deviantart.com/art/Destiny-14107530
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie contest by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
450 points, ended September 9, 2008, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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A beautifully written poem
Creative, soft words fill the readers mind.
Story that unfurls
Best wishes and thank you for your entry
Julie
clappy*
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thanks for your lovely comment and for the bronze wow
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I really do love this poem and I can visualise what you are saying and feel what you are thinking, brilliant
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Thank you
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a great take on the promt good luck in the contest
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thank you
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