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destiny to me

destiny is a kinder name for faith
destiny apologies after destroying your world
unlike faith that just laughs in your faces
destiny has compassion and kindness
she sheds a tear for the ones in her path
her job isn't always acceptable to herself
but she knows unlike others she does it well
with a open heart and sadden soul
destiny is faith with a beating heart
luck with a friends loyalty
and karma with a unique touch

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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 9, 2008

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    I love the thoughts you have created, bringing this poem to modern day society
    destiny apologies after destroying your world
    unlike faith that just laughs in your faces
    Best wishes and thank you for your entry
    Julie


  • maralisa silver member
    September 9, 2008
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    a brilliant take on the promt good luck in the contest