Would you
take my hand?
Would you
smile at me?
Would you
hold me close
then set me
soaring free?
Would you
tell me
this is not a dream?
Would you
let me
dream?
Would you
tell me the truth
if I asked it of you?
Would you?
Would you?
Would you?
Would you....?
Author notes
This is just about a dream I held one night and how I wish it were true.
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like this, I've had dreams that I wish were true, sometimes just want to go back to sleep and try to recapture them.
Well done. -
Like this one as well. Like the format and repetition which gives the poem a very strong feeling of longing.
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Very nice... simple, and effective... well done and thankyou for entering!
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