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Gently folded

Missing image

written words
of love and hope

hidden from eyes,
not wanting to see


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Picture Credit: http://abstraktphotography.deviantart.com/art/Poetry-52492873

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    September 15, 2008

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    I can just see someone looking at an envelope and not daring to have the courage to read it


    Thank You & Best of Luck!
    Stay safe
    ~Manda


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Yeah, I like this! The title works brilliantly with your words. Very clever. Well done. Good luck in the contest.


  • PrincessOfFire
    September 14, 2008

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    I'm not sure how the hidden part fits in with the paper laying there, but we will suppose you floded it. good take on pic and good luck. Rose


  • Aussie Gypsy gold member
    September 14, 2008

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    Words of the very worst kind, thise hidden from the ones we love, when we should be telling them, great interpretation of the picture. Best to you in the contest


  • Topaze
    September 14, 2008
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    A very nice piece, my best wishes in the contest.


  • Cannonsfire
    September 8, 2008
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    C


  • mysticstorm gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Very sad, deep and strong...
    how often this is true...
    what a wonderful take on the picture...beuaty in brevity!

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