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Cats and bunnies

The gods made themselves
but the chaos demons came out of no-where
And the demons decided to have issues with the gods.
Now the gods are history.
splattered all over the sky.
But you can only see them at night.
Stupid sun gets in the way
during the day
But what are you gonna do.
Anyway in the future humans
are the bunny-like pets of the
demons.
And then they too
shall become history.
But if the humans should choose to die
before then.
The succubi and the incubi
won't get their bunnies
and that will piss them off.

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  • Glenn
    September 8, 2008

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    The gods made themselves
    but the chaos demons came out of no-where
    = ya that’s right. God didn’t create them.

    Anyway in the future humans
    are the bunny-like pets of the
    demons.
    = not in future, now in this present world we can see them among us.
    And this will not be the future condition. This things will dissapeare forever

    I think this poem is more related to spiritual poem.

    It was a good poem