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waitress check please

"you want an apple pie with that" my first words spoken to you
five seconds later you tapped my shoulder "i order a hamburger miss, not a veggie....where's the beef ?"
"anyway you like it sir ? the lot or maybe plain ?" sarcasm now in play
with a twinkle in you baby blues this is what you said "hot and juicy is my preferences miss....i like my cow alive"

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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    September 29, 2008
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    I really like your take on the word bank. great job with your poem.

    good luck

    kat