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Blue Moon

Ran into some psychic woman
she said our paths would cross again
In four years I'll be that woman
but you're already that man
I am waiting for showdown
but it don't come soon enough
Maybe we are still not ready
Maybe I am still too tough

All I know is that I believe in fate
and destiny doesn't negotiate
But you ought to know

There is someone who'll hear you when you pray
There is someone who thinks of you every day
Let that ease your mind when the stars turn blue
And we will meet - when the moon's blue, too

From the bottom of the bottle
nothing sensible comes through
I am drunk and I am happy
but I still haven't got you
All the memories ache
but I sing a happy tune
Life goes on without you
But I hope someday is soon

All I know is that I believe in fate
and destiny doesn't negotiate
Until then

There is someone who'll hear you when you pray
There is someone who thinks of you still everyday
Let that ease your mind when the stars turn blue
And we will meet - when the moon's blue, too
When the moon's blue too

Wait for me, wait for love
Don't settle for not enough
You know it's all for you
if you're patient
and you are, aren't you?

There is someone who'll hear you when you pray
There is someone who thinks of you still everyday
Let that ease your mind when the stars turn blue
And we will meet - when the moon's blue, too
When the moon's blue too

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  • Unforgotten
    September 8, 2008

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    nice

    nice rhymine rhythm and cadence...not too heavey handed but not too simplistic either. a nice balance. good job :-)


  • Glenn
    September 8, 2008

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    There is someone who'll hear you when you pray

    Good poem, written very well.
    There is someone who'll hear you when you pray .i liked theis line of this poem.