The ink knew that she didn't love me,
that she never would reply.
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IX by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I am almost a little speechless with this as I just love the way you've given the ink a mind of it's own
♥
Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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I think it was more your heart knew. But you do guide the ink so maybe... Good luck. Rose
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What a unique approach to this contest, the ink knowing what you heart couldn't handle to hear. Best to you in the contest
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I like the idea behind this, my best wishes in the contest.
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Ooo, interesting! contest writing! you could win yourself some trophies. I opened the poem in search for more! but there was no more. But that's ok. Short poems are awesome. Good luck in the contest my dear >.<
-Love Sam
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