I saw an azure star shines in the firmament,
dreamt of your eyes as have seen my mother,
thoughts of a beloved, once stroked in past,
to cry silent choked sobs in memoirs bouquet.
A remembrance profound to need few teary words,
a life on earth is tough, courageous to conquer,
keep on guard to bliss from radiating misfortunes,
to expect, when don't believe, in an awakened grace.
You cared living for helpless loosing their happiness,
woven the threads connected by an invisible paradise,
to separate miseries beyond existence for just a cause,
ringing survival bells to be heard in celestial angels' ears.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: 1. Bouquets of Tears
Dedicated with all respects in memory of 'MOTHER TERRESA'
A contest entry
- PIF PROMPT CONTEST by penman.
700 points, ended September 9, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From September 2008 by amaranthine lover.
2100 points, ended February 6, 24 entries
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this is beautiful
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nicely written . . lovely dedication to Mother Terresa . . liked "to cry silent choked sobs in memoirs bouquet" and "ringing survival bells to be heard in celestial angels' ears" . . congrats on the silver
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wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.
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WOW <-- can't say much more than that. At first it didn't quite add up to me until i saw who the dedication was for and just then the entire meaning of the poem itself changed completely for me, and i was just like ... wow, quite literally! Bravo!
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