words penned on paper
scribbled lines
a testament of one's life
once lived
A contest entry
- 13 Words Only for this Picture IX by Manda Kathryn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2008, 39 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is very unique indeed. I really enjoyed reading this one. Good luck in the contest. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain
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I rather like the 'scribbled lines' part, I feel as though I am flicking through a book that is not all nice and neat but instead written in the moment ... my kind of book

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Thank You & Best of Luck!
Stay safe
~Manda
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I feel this could also be the life one is living as well as life already lived. Good luck. Rose
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I like the line you have taken on this one. it is the only testament to the life we leave behind. Well done, best to you in the contest


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A lovely piece, my best wishes in the contest.


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forever captured on paper...I like it. Best of luck in the contest.
SJ
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