Where do I go wrong
So many loved
So many lost
So much aching
A crimson river
Flows from my broken heart
Turning it black and bruised
From all that I've loved
From all that I've lost
Some how it always goes wrong
Arguments
Yelling
Crying
Broken hearts.
No matter how hard I try
Something always goes wrong.
Weather it's me
or weather it's her
Weather she is cheating
or weather I am.
I sit here alone
Gazing up into the stars
Wish you were next to me
Like you were just yesterday
But then something went wrong
24 hours later
I sit there all alone
Sharing my thoughts with the sky.
"Sky shining so bright
With your stars
With your beauty.
If only I was like you.
Where do I always go wrong?
5 Girlfriends and 5 years.
What do I have to show.
Talking to the stars, all alone.
Author notes
Some of what I am feeling write now. Except I am not outside... I am in my dining room 
But it's easy to get what I am saying, how things can change so quick, and even if you do the tiniest thing, it can end up being the biggest... leaving you all alone
A contest entry
- Give Me Your Love! by SincerelyMegan.
575 points, ended September 14, 2008, 43 entries
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Comments
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"Flows from my broken heart
Turning it black and bruised"
I love those lines.
Thought the poem didn't flow as well as I would like it to, I found this extremely easy to relate to. And it made me feel everything that you're feeling.
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