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You over and over again

You make me smile you really do
You have so much to give
You once waddled round the garden
But you didn't have long to live

You really are delicious
You really are the best
I think I want to have you
You are sweeter than the rest

Whenever you are close to me
You set my heart a flutter
You go so well with a cup of tea
I love you with bread and butter

But now you must accept your fate
you will end in one huge bite
You really are delicious
You will grace my plate tonight

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  • Poetess12
    September 8, 2008
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    I love your poem. It's cute.

    the flow of the rhyme was good.

    Thank you for your entry.