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Slippery

Like lubricated ribbon string
sloping downward towards obsession,
is a costly lesson to relearn if not undone
for worthless now the fun from which I run
away from a dream put behind
a mind races on time...

Sept. 08, '08

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  • InfiniteAbsolution
    September 15, 2008
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    very nice write.. i love the sexual undertones..perfect


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    September 8, 2008

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    Like lubricated ribbon string
    sloping downward towards obsession, .. speaks my language from the start.
    An awesome thought provoking poem
    Love it Sis
    Julie xx